By The Window
“There ain’t no sky today,”
Says the young girl from her swing.
A lecture on her grammar,
Then escape from pouring rain.
Near the window, she sits,
Watching Mother Earth cry;
If thunderclaps are footsteps,
Who is walking, and why?
Beckoned toward the rug,
To her spot, she then goes.
In a sea of chatter and noise
Hands fly up; curiosity flows.
Children love to ask questions,
Always want to know more—
Yet it fades ever slowly:
Inquisitive nature to a slamming door.
Where on our life journey
Does the wonder disappear?
Was it dropped just past the trailhead…
Is it even still here?
I look again at the rug,
A tightness in my chest—
How could I miss so dearly
One who never left?
She rolls in with the storm,
As rain pours and wind howls.
By the window, I sit and welcome in
The curious child I’ve always been.
February 24, 2025 at 8:32 am
I like how you talk about the wonders of being a child and how many expect our curiosity to fade with age. I also like how you ended your poem with a sense of curiosity!
February 24, 2025 at 8:34 am
I love how you described the inescapable effect of time and how you connected it to the consistent fact of nature. I thought one of the most powerful lines was, “Yet it fades ever slowly: Inquisitive nature to a slamming door.”
February 24, 2025 at 12:02 pm
This poem is a beautiful reminder of the pure curiosity and wonder that children bring to the world. The young girl on her swing, observing the world with fresh eyes, perfectly captures the magic of seeing life with unfiltered fascination. Her questions, her wonder at the storm, and her innocent reflections on the world remind us of how vibrant and alive curiosity can make us feel.