There’s no sky today.
So look for the stars beyond.
Behold their beauty.
2025 Street Snippets, February - Story by Jon - Photo by Pexels
2025 Street Snippets, February - Story by Jon - Photo by Pexels
There’s no sky today.
So look for the stars beyond.
Behold their beauty.
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February 24, 2025 at 12:02 pm
I like how much emotion you captured in so few lines. It is an optimistic piece, when many others went for a darker approach. It’s refreshing. I especially like the alliteration present in the ending of the second line going into the third, “beyond […] behold […] beauty”.
February 24, 2025 at 12:12 pm
Short and sweet I love it
February 24, 2025 at 12:13 pm
I LOVE THIS. It’s so short but it has such a powerful message that I think is enunciated by the short form of the haiku. This hits me directly in the heart. I think that this is beautiful writing and not all writing has to be long and especially eloquent to be considered good. Sometimes, it’s the least amount of words that make us feel the most. Amazing job.