Only Silence
There ain’t no sky today,
The only light is the reflection of an illuminated city.
There ain’t much sound today,
Only the buzzing of neon lights across the roofs of the buildings,
But there’s nobody there.
There ain’t no person in sight,
Only the aroma of delicacies.
The streets still smelling of food,
The scents of noodles and chicken,
Steam rising from the dishes.
There ain’t no person here to devour their gluttonous appetite.
The city is still empty.
No more children running around,
Looking up there’s nothing there.
No sky, no clouds, no color.
It’s as if the world has stopped.
And I’m alone.
Then the power goes out.
The whole city has gone dark and asleep.
Silence draped over the city like a heavy fog
No more quiet sounds of lights.
The only sound is of the rats scurrying through the darkened roadways,
Gnawing on the remaining delicious food layered along the street, unattended by human hands.
Nobody swatting away the fiending rodents.
What happened to the city I once adored.
Can I bring it back to its former glory?
Then I catch a glimpse.
A patch of seemingly glowing green grass,
Surrounded by an array of glorious flowers.
An older man stands in the middle of the patch.
Looking out upon the darkened city.
Just when I think there ain’t no hope,
Then the sky unfurls itself.
The man begins to disappear before me.
The people commence to reappear in their former spots.
Was it all in my head?
Did the city actually turn off?
Was the silence real?
February 24, 2025 at 12:06 pm
I think this turned out really good! I l really like the repetition of “there ain’t,” and how you took the original prompt and really wove it into your entire piece!
February 24, 2025 at 12:06 pm
love it, man, its like the animated film “spirited away” with the food. I love food.
February 24, 2025 at 12:13 pm
The way that you create a vivid dystopian world in such few words is impressive. The ending as well, creating a mysterious air around whether what he was experiencing was real or not results in a great read.