“You’ve got a college degree? What are you doing here?” The question hung in the air for what felt like minutes but was only a second. “Sometimes, life doesn’t go as planned,” Alex replied, swirling the amber liquid in his glass. “I studied literature, always dreamed of becoming a man like my father, but here I am, sitting at a bar in a small town with years of my life wasted.”
A regular named John was the man that had asked this question. He leaned in closer to Alex responding with “What’s the story then? Why isn’t it that you’re out there chasing your dreams?”
Sighing in sadness, Alex responds with “I guess I just found something here that I couldn’t in the city. Maybe it’s just that I knew I couldn’t live up to my dads work, or maybe it’s the peace, inspiration, and simplicity I find here.” After a bit of silence Alex adds “Or it’s that every person who walks in here has a story of their own, and that alone, is worth more than any college degree.”
January 7, 2025 at 8:20 am
I like how the closing line shows the value Alex puts in things, and how it’s implied that college isn’t everything.
January 7, 2025 at 8:28 am
This is a really unique story. Most responses to this prompt seem to be about hardship (lack of experience, lack of jobs, etc) but this shows a different reason for not utilizing a degree: wanting a peaceful life.
January 7, 2025 at 11:56 am
I like the image of the “amber liquid” — I’d love to know more about the relationship with the mysterious father. Maybe there’s a sequel in the works?
January 7, 2025 at 11:59 am
Nice job! I really like how you incorporated the feelings of sadness and regret.
January 7, 2025 at 12:00 pm
I like how you made the characters have a deep conversation. I really had the picture in my mind
January 7, 2025 at 2:45 pm
Despite the shorter length, this story feels full while also making me want to know more. You did a really good job subtly adding in backstory and context without spelling it out for the audience. Alex strikes me as a character with a lot hiding beneath the surface and a sort of mysterious air about them. I want to know more about this universe and its characters!